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Post by liquidsword34 on Jan 16, 2013 12:01:55 GMT -5
Just giving the first issue another proof read.
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Post by liquidsword34 on Jan 16, 2013 12:58:37 GMT -5
Issue #1 is up. A Constantine Cookie to whoever gets the crossword answer correct.
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Post by Stardrifter on Jan 16, 2013 17:56:34 GMT -5
Censure.
Not a bad start. The British accent/words were a bit thick, but not hard to follow. Was a bit wordy and not a lot of story for a first issue, so I hope things pick up soon. Keep em coming.
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Post by liquidsword34 on Jan 16, 2013 19:49:51 GMT -5
I was going back and forth on whether this should be issue 0 or 1, really. It's pretty much an intro to John and what he does/can do more than anything.
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Post by Drake on Jan 16, 2013 20:39:38 GMT -5
Very good. This was my favorite issue of everything you've written. Limited grammatical errors and excellent characterization. It was a good intro to John and I looked forward to more. 8.5/10. Missing 1.5 because it was a little slow and there were some grammar errors.
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Post by buck on Jan 30, 2013 12:39:55 GMT -5
I enjoyed the issue. Simple plot to allow us to wrap our heads around who John is was well done. I like the one and done format hope that you use that frequently.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Feb 1, 2013 12:25:10 GMT -5
I really liked this. Given the source material, I was expecting some kind of demon exorcist something, but the plot twist was something legitimately honest and kind of heart-warming.
I imagine that, this being Constantine, it won't stay that way for long.
Very good introduction to the character.
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Post by liquidsword34 on Feb 5, 2013 19:49:24 GMT -5
Issue 2 is up
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Post by Stardrifter on Feb 7, 2013 14:52:07 GMT -5
Very good issue. You've really gotten John's voice down. Granted I'm reading this on lunch at work on my phone, but the only error I found was the use of span. Otherwise, superbly done. Keep em coming.
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Post by buck on Feb 16, 2013 2:32:23 GMT -5
Great second issue.
Definitely intrigued with what you have planned with Jack the Ripper.
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Post by Ultimate Silentking on Feb 16, 2013 13:55:07 GMT -5
Read only the first issue so far. It was a good intro to John like everyone else said. There is nothing bad about this except that for some reason I had trouble getting into it at first. 8/10
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Post by liquidsword34 on Feb 16, 2013 14:50:56 GMT -5
There is nothing bad about this except that for someone I had trouble getting into it at first. Huh?
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Post by Ultimate Silentking on Feb 16, 2013 14:57:28 GMT -5
What?! I totally did not put "someone" instead of "some reason" by mistake! >.>
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Post by Ultimate Silentking on Feb 17, 2013 14:38:53 GMT -5
A bloody good read, sir! Plus, you can never go wrong with having Jack the Ripper as a foe! Very good issue. Can't wait for more! 9/10
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Post by Drake on Feb 17, 2013 16:24:47 GMT -5
Favorite issue out of everything that's you've written. A damn good read. 9/10.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Feb 25, 2013 12:31:24 GMT -5
Good read. Not much in the way of spelling/grammar errors. Good start to an intriguing storyline.
So solid issue. Not much to say that hasn't already been said.
And to think this whole situation could've been avoided if Constantine would have been a gentleman and offered her breakfast instead of ditching her.
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Post by liquidsword34 on Mar 5, 2013 20:20:25 GMT -5
Issue three is up.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Mar 6, 2013 15:27:16 GMT -5
I love the accents and cultural vocabulary. If they turn out to be somehow inaccurate, I wouldn't know because you sell it perfectly.
The villain seemed to rush to the exposition a little too quickly, like he was all too eager to pour his life's story out to someone he intended to kill. Sometimes that kind of exposition is necessary, but it's still kind of annoying.
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Post by Stardrifter on Mar 6, 2013 17:50:44 GMT -5
Yeah I agree about the monologuing. Would have worked better had they met in the coffee shop or some other place where Jack wouldn't risk a confrontation, giving them reason to spar verbally. But other than that, the issue was another good one. I hope you go more into John's history soon. With what's coming it would be a good opportunity. Keep em coming.
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Post by adrini on Mar 14, 2013 16:48:15 GMT -5
I might have to start reading this comic. It's part Dresden files and part Sherlock Holmes. Two of my very favorite things.
The conversations built very well, and I liked the nior feel of the language. Very well done.
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