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Post by Stardrifter on Jun 24, 2011 8:32:17 GMT -5
Was very well done. I call shenanigans on the name Sines Toro though. Sinestro is an obviously evil name, but Sines Toro is just silly. I fully expect, no I demand, that at some point someone fighting him creates a cape and shouts, "Toro! Toro!" like a bullfighter.
Good job though. Nice action. Keep 'em coming.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Jun 27, 2011 20:27:14 GMT -5
I enjoyed the read and seeing Hal and Sin take down a bad guy. Plus the whole death of Abin Sir there. Them going into space and Oa has me interested a lot.
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Post by jross on Jun 28, 2011 20:43:00 GMT -5
Oa, and especially the Guardians, are going to diverge significantly. I took my cue for Sines Toro from Gah Lak Tus. I guess that I'll just have to work harder to make him entertaining for you Stardrifter001!
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Post by jross on Jul 4, 2011 0:10:09 GMT -5
So this last issue (#3) really is starting to set up things that I will use later. See if you can catch them.
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Post by jross on Jul 15, 2011 2:52:21 GMT -5
Issue 4 is up.
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Post by jackalope on Jul 15, 2011 6:12:11 GMT -5
Great, never was a GL fan so I don't know whats original and whats part of the regular GL universe but it's all pretty great stuff. Not having seen the film I'm still going to hazard a guess this'd be better than it... keep it up.
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Post by jross on Jul 15, 2011 10:06:13 GMT -5
Thank you, sir. The more I think about the film, the more disappointed I become. Anyhoo, there's going to be a time jump after this issue.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jul 15, 2011 21:31:04 GMT -5
Great ending.
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Post by jross on Jul 17, 2011 13:56:41 GMT -5
Thanks. The time skip is going to be necessary, but after this the myth arc really kicks in. BTW, anyone think that they're catching some of the things being set up?
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jul 17, 2011 15:52:29 GMT -5
I think I am. Don't know completely on how you're going to pull them off but I'm noticing the subtle and not subtle cues.
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Post by jross on Jul 18, 2011 18:45:16 GMT -5
Well one thing for instance is that Sines Toro uses constructs in combat that are designed to be frightening, such as monsters.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Jul 24, 2011 15:42:18 GMT -5
I enjoyed this read. I liked the latest one I read with Hal meeting the guardians for the 1st time and not walking away with good feelings. Can't wait til we see the rest of them.
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Post by jross on Jul 26, 2011 8:25:05 GMT -5
Rest of the Guardians? They're like the Borg, one is the same as the others. Rest of the GLs? Those guys are coming soon!
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Post by Stardrifter on Jul 31, 2011 9:23:07 GMT -5
Issue 4 was good. Interesting take on the Guardians. Toro Tora seems to have already gotten Hal to doubt them. Was a little strange that Hal just went on another mission with him without spending time training on Oa.
I liked it and the things you're setting up. The scene with Carol and Guy was just creepy. Dunno if that was intended or not. Keep 'em coming.
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Post by jross on Aug 7, 2011 0:42:05 GMT -5
The first scene of issue five explains leaving as they did. The part with Carol and Guy is about bi-polar disorder. The "meat" part is not related to Carol and Guy. There is a time jump, and Hal and Sines Toro have been training. Thanks for all the feedback.
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Post by jross on Sept 30, 2011 19:00:40 GMT -5
Issue five is up.
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Post by C_Miller on Sept 30, 2011 19:56:35 GMT -5
It's great to see your name back in the Recently Updated table and it's great to see another issue of Green Lantern. That said, I found myself enjoying this issue, despite it being a bit... uneven IMO, which is far from the best word, but that's the best I can think of. I'm really digging Sines Toro and the Corps in General. Each one of them has a distinct alien quality to them, especially Sines Toro. I could have read a whole issue of him and Hal talking back and forth. Therefore I was kind of upset that you cut from that for the second half of the issue, not that it was bad, because it wasn't. I'm a huge John Stewart fan, so it was cool to see him. Still good stuff with the promise for more.
Your work has a very readable quality to it that makes me want to read more without feeling like I'm unfulfilled. That's a very good quality.
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Post by jackalope on Oct 1, 2011 0:19:10 GMT -5
I'm definitely looking forward to more. It was nicely written, and like Miller, I liked the aliens. Keep it up.
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Post by Stardrifter on Oct 5, 2011 19:22:03 GMT -5
It was a good issue. Just didn't seem to go anywhere. But it was well written.
I did have issue with John Stewart. Every scene had him whining in it. Didn't feel to me like a good showing for him.
Keep 'em coming.
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Post by jross on Oct 6, 2011 0:19:46 GMT -5
I see your point, Stardrifter. This is one of those two or three part issues. I should have put that in the title. Also, I was going for John Stewart to come across as idealistic. Def a bit of a whiner. Oops.
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