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Post by blueeyeddevil on Jul 23, 2011 14:03:22 GMT -5
Finally have the first issue up. Just as a note, all spelling errors in Ultraman's dialogue are intentional. Hope you guys like it. I hope to have Owlman's origin up in a few days.
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Post by buck on Jul 23, 2011 14:14:22 GMT -5
I liked it. Very interested to see where you go from here.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jul 23, 2011 14:35:18 GMT -5
Didn't even notice you claimed the Jokester. Good start and I love it when someone actually puts in the effort to describe a character.
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Post by jackalope on Jul 24, 2011 2:10:18 GMT -5
Great work. I kinda wish they were part of our universe (rather than the anti-matter), just because it seems like all of your characters are going to be pretty cool, but I can tell this is going to be a fun story to read with how much freedom you have to mess with the world.
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Post by blueeyeddevil on Jul 24, 2011 12:08:21 GMT -5
They are a part of the main universe.
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Post by jackalope on Jul 24, 2011 18:37:50 GMT -5
Ok, just reread, Kent Clark- my head swapped that around automatically when I read it. That's awesome. I'm glad you're within our universe, the chance for our heroes to possibly face such a powerful villain group in the future (and to see things from their perspective) is cool.
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Post by blueeyeddevil on Jul 24, 2011 23:07:41 GMT -5
that is what I'm trying to set up. |
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jul 24, 2011 23:46:37 GMT -5
I think you should modify Owlman's origin real quick. I think you forgot the paragraph breaks...
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Post by blueeyeddevil on Jul 25, 2011 10:42:18 GMT -5
Fixed, and edited a little.
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Post by Stardrifter on Aug 2, 2011 11:58:35 GMT -5
I liked it. But I thought I was reading another universe. How is Owlman's origin going to fit in with this universe? I also thought the origin was a little overwritten.
But it was good. Nice setup. Keep 'em coming.
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Post by blueeyeddevil on Aug 5, 2011 10:20:47 GMT -5
I also thought the origin was a little overwritten. Yeah, it is. I've realized the piece is flawed since I wrote it. I am likely gonna rewrite, but I've been busy moving recently. |
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Post by superecwfan1 on Aug 31, 2011 20:26:37 GMT -5
I really liked the 1st issue. How we meet Owlman , Ultra-Man and (name escapes me). It was a good read and I liked how Owl Man's over confidence lost him against the Joker. So he goes to jail. The prison break should be fun.
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Post by blueeyeddevil on Sept 15, 2011 19:12:59 GMT -5
Finally have the new issue up. I'm also gonna have a rewritten Owlman origin up soon, as well as Ultraman's. I have them written out in notes, just gotta turn them into prose. Hope you guys enjoy it.
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Post by jackalope on Sept 17, 2011 17:42:37 GMT -5
Awesome. Loved each of the characters, especially the new Volthoom. They were all a little cartoony but it worked for them. Great length- long but I enjoyed all of it. Good stuff. Will make an amazing team of villains to come up against in the future.
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Post by Stardrifter on Sept 29, 2011 22:16:26 GMT -5
It was good. You wrote the violence well and the characters came across as unique. Only issue I see is how this fits in. They're just so similar it seems wrong for them to be in the same universe.
Keep them coming.
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