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Post by DiscipleofBob on Oct 31, 2013 0:13:49 GMT -5
Discussion topic for all Nightmare Universe and related stories.
Comments, suggestions, possible future plans. Any and all of it go here.
Still working on Nightmare Wonder Woman. Should hopefully be up by the end of October 31st, as I hope the some of the other Nightmare titles are too.
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Post by adrini on Oct 31, 2013 16:08:17 GMT -5
Just wondering if people are going for a otherworld ending or just a cute Halloween story. I need to know how to end mine.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Nov 1, 2013 0:53:14 GMT -5
Posted what looks like to be the first story, though it still is largely unfinished. I will go back and add more soon, but I thought we should at least get something up.
I suppose the Nightmare titles should actually have a final deadline. Let's say that all Nightmare titles are due by the end of November, at which point this particular Elseworld will be locked and reserved for future incentive programs.
Interested to see what kind of alternate universe twists other people come up with.
Happy Halloween!
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Nov 4, 2013 9:24:34 GMT -5
Review for Nightmare Green Arrow:
I like it. A bit rushed and condensed, but that's to be expected from a one-shot. Could have used a bit more editing as there are a few typos that make it obvious you're typing from a phone, such as "smal gyr hawk."
It could have used a bit more detail, such as better descriptions of the hags or the "good" birds, or better conveying that Oliver couldn't see their true forms but for some reason Roy can. I wouldn't say it's really scary, but no one ever said that was a requirement. Instead, it feels more like "Disneyworld at Halloween" levels of scary. Still a creative twist on an alt version Birds of Prey.
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