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Post by damian on Jan 26, 2012 21:51:45 GMT -5
Just caught up today. I have a few issues with the pacing, but I always enjoy a good clash of personalities.
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Post by jackalope on Feb 1, 2012 0:15:10 GMT -5
It was good, certainly a free for all. It's a little short but I see it's a second part, so that's fine. I am interested in what you do with these guys.
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Post by C_Miller on Feb 10, 2012 0:24:43 GMT -5
I've just caught myself up. I love your team (one of the best non-traditional teams on the site at the moment) and the personalities seem to be meshing rather well in a cacophonous sort of way.
One of the critiques I have woud have is to edit your work. Now, personally, without fail, I will have at least one typo in every issue I release, but there were some typos in here that slowed up my flow a lot more than I generally like. There was also some awkward phrasings. Wachter and buck are two good editors, if you want to send it to some one. But before you post, read it aloud to check the flow and for typos.
But keep it up!
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Post by superecwfan1 on Feb 11, 2012 12:27:32 GMT -5
I admit I suck at grammar issues and all. So you won't hear me get into that. I did like the team fighting and Arrowette winning at the end. Plus I am liking the introduction Brother Blood. That should be fun.
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Post by someonespc on Feb 15, 2012 19:25:49 GMT -5
Issue 3 is up. Thanks to Watcher for editing it for me. Issue four is a one part story and three is cleaning up muddled plot lines. So if it seems a little rushed; it is.
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Post by jackalope on Mar 3, 2012 23:19:45 GMT -5
I really enjoyed it. A little bit of an anti climax for the destruction of Brother Blood and co. but a fun intro for (I'm guessing) Miss M. Good work.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2012 0:53:50 GMT -5
I just caught up on these today and I really like the cast and direction. My biggest issue is with the pacing. I think some of the ideas could have used a little more space to gain traction, but fast and furious is good too.
I'll echo others about editing and rereading for flow/sound, but overall I am enjoying the series.
-M
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