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Post by C_Miller on Jul 4, 2011 16:54:09 GMT -5
I liked it. Zee has a good voice and I still like the whole college setting for her. I will say however, she opened up to Julie a little bit quicker that I feel like someone would. Small quibble though. Keep it up.
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Post by Stardrifter on Jul 5, 2011 9:19:46 GMT -5
Was good. Pretty much agree with what's already been said. Keep 'em coming.
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Post by Ryan on Aug 2, 2011 22:37:26 GMT -5
Issue 4 is done, just need to proof read it and it'll be up tomorrow.
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Post by Ryan on Aug 3, 2011 20:57:28 GMT -5
#4 is up and running
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Post by jackalope on Aug 4, 2011 3:47:57 GMT -5
Good work, the only thing I was confused by was the last line... She knew this had everything, but knew she’d be ready for it. -is this talking about the exam? Sorry, I'm probably reading it wrong. Anyway, I'm liking this story. I like that her dad is actually alive, and I hope he stays that way for a while just so we can see the father daughter relationship develop. She's a good character, and I like that now that you've done 4 issues your version is officially part of our ultimate continuity.
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Post by Ryan on Aug 4, 2011 6:24:41 GMT -5
Thanks and no you didn't read it wrong I added that line in right before I posted it and didn't read it over. This is what it should have said.
"She knew the last couple of days had changed everything, but she'd be ready for it."
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Aug 4, 2011 11:54:14 GMT -5
Not a bad issue and I certainly couldn't keep track of her spells right away but I think you could have been better had you proofread it more and had someone else do it. But that's just the editor in me speaking
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Post by Ryan on Aug 4, 2011 12:23:33 GMT -5
I do her spells the same way they appear in the comic. Which is why I keep the spells fairly short, instead of long and drawn out.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Aug 4, 2011 14:04:45 GMT -5
I think you misunderstood me. Didn’t mean the spells needed work. Just saying it took my mind a few seconds to get them unless I continued to read and it showed what happened. Everything else needed a bit more proofing in my mind but that’s just me.
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Post by Ryan on Aug 4, 2011 16:08:58 GMT -5
Maybe I'll have you look over future stuff, just like we do for our other titles. Yeah the spells are tircky, I usually have to spell them normal and then spell it out backwards while looking at it. It can be a pain on occasion.
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Post by Stardrifter on Aug 6, 2011 21:03:03 GMT -5
Was a good issue. Nice action. Nice resolution. Kudos to not killing Zatara. I kept waiting for the cliche where he's killed, leaving Zatanna alone without a parent so she has to come into her own etc.
Keep 'em coming.
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Post by Ryan on Aug 6, 2011 21:38:04 GMT -5
Thanks and to be honest I came so close to doing that, but changed my mind last minute. Like you said it's kinda cliche, and I thought he could be a bigger part of the story later on down the road.
I'll keep'em coming, I'm really excited for the next arc.
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Post by Ryan on Sept 1, 2011 18:30:36 GMT -5
#5 is up as well. Two in one day!
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Post by jackalope on Sept 2, 2011 5:51:44 GMT -5
Nice work, lots to read today! Zatanna is a fun title to read. Felt short, but that didn't really worry me. 'Nuff said.
Am waiting to see if she keeps the costume...
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Post by buck on Sept 2, 2011 14:10:34 GMT -5
Enjoyable issue and looks like another fun arc.
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Post by Stardrifter on Sept 4, 2011 11:57:10 GMT -5
Was short but good. Not much else to say about it. All setup for the rest of the arc. Keep em coming.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Oct 23, 2011 16:11:36 GMT -5
You and I both know that was the real Booster hoping to catch a look at Zee.
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Post by Ryan on Oct 24, 2011 10:20:21 GMT -5
It could be, haha....But I actually have a story point coming up in the next issue that will kinda focus on the costumes.
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Post by Ryan on Nov 17, 2011 13:13:10 GMT -5
New issue up. Thanks to Watcher for helping me out with this issue.
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Post by jackalope on Nov 18, 2011 0:47:54 GMT -5
Could definitely see Wachter's greasy fingerprints all over this one, but it was fantastic. A fun adventure. I loved the fact that Booster's fantasy was to be Batman rather than Supes (great idea). Look forward to the next.
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