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Post by tjkernan on Jan 16, 2012 15:52:43 GMT -5
Alright, the first issue of Ultimate Pilgrim has been released upon the world! Behold! Enjoy!
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jan 16, 2012 16:12:49 GMT -5
Not bad. Some fun action scenes and I don't say this enough but... those were some descent sized paragraphs. Good job.
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Post by jackalope on Jan 31, 2012 2:29:40 GMT -5
I liked it, the were-rats were a cool idea. Might ending up borrowing that (I'll ask properly if I have a decent idea). Like most of what you write, I have little knowledge of who you characters are, but that's cool, I look forward to finding out.
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Post by tjkernan on Jan 31, 2012 12:04:30 GMT -5
On borrowing Were-creatures, I was going to post a thread about in the Author section about that.
Writers looking for villains/characters should feel free to use creatures from the Werenations when they want...
Wererats are the most abundant remaining Were creatures. They have made their home in sewers and abandoned buildings in major United States and European cities, as well as India.
Werewolves are rarer but there are still some running around. They live primarily on the West Coast, but strays can be found all over the globe.
Werebears are rarer still, primarily living in Canada and Russia
Though generally thought extinct, there are rumors of small pockets of other Were species still existing in isolated areas- Werecats in South America (Panthers) and Africa (Lions), Werebats in Mexico and Central America, etc, etc...
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Post by buck on Jan 31, 2012 21:09:51 GMT -5
Excellent opening chapter. I enjoy the idea of the Werenations and can't wait to see them further integrated into the UDCU.
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Post by tjkernan on Feb 16, 2012 17:56:10 GMT -5
Alright, second issue up.
If you have ever read Wetworks, you may notice I changed up her symbiote powers. I thought a pro sniper who is werewolf who can turn invisible, phase, and shift through time was just a little too powerful for my taste, so I ditched the whole phasing/time travel thing in favor of a Rogue-esque ability to absorb memories and powers.
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Post by buck on Mar 2, 2012 23:22:42 GMT -5
I've enjoyed this series thoroughly and can't wait for future chapters. I love the introduction of Jason Moore and can't wait to see what develops with his character. I always love the idea of special agents hunting down killers and vice versa. Can't wait to see what develops between these too.
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Post by jackalope on Mar 4, 2012 3:17:04 GMT -5
Ok, so 2 &3. I really liked seeing the consequences of Martiza's memory absorbing power- an idea that plays out well. I'm really not sure how you're going to connect the Were's with the Kherubim- so I'll be interested to see how that works (if there is any connection). Well written. I look forward to seeing more- especially if there's any particular organisation to the Weres, and if so how it works.
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Post by tjkernan on Mar 4, 2012 12:16:47 GMT -5
There is a connection between the Kheribum and the Weres. It concerns the Symbiotes, and binds Pilgrim, Warblade, Menagerie, and a future villain (who will actually be introduced far in the past, in The Great and Secret War limited series) together. This storyline is slow-burning and will come to a head probably towards fall/winter.
Next issue of Pilgrim will feature more on the Were Hierarchy, btw, as we learn more about Pilgrim's father, Jaguar, and how he is running the Were business.
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