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Post by Toriach on May 23, 2011 3:12:43 GMT -5
Well the first part of the first issue is up. I decided to post in this way, in part as a way of getting some early traction and also as a way of forcing myself to kind of get it written and get it out there instead of getting stuck in self editing paralysis.
I hope everyone enjoys.
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Post by C_Miller on May 23, 2011 7:55:37 GMT -5
I liked it. Definitely short, but there's definitely going to be more to it soon. I never read the Manhunter comics (although I keep hearing that's a mistake), so I don't know how close to the source material this is, but I did like this and I look forward to the continuation.
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Post by darthphere on May 23, 2011 22:43:07 GMT -5
I think I want more prison scenes. LOL! I'm a huge fan of Oz. Either way, I'm loving the set-up of this. Someone on one side of the law who ends up on the other. Those type of stories are great.
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Post by superecwfan1 on May 26, 2011 15:38:02 GMT -5
I wanted to wait til both parts were done before posting . But in the end I liked it. I am suprised to see Kate in prison and seeing the former Blue Devil as a parole officer.
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Post by Ryan on May 26, 2011 17:17:46 GMT -5
I liked it, but I didn't realize you claimed Blue Devil, because I did too. I didn't see it on the Master Claims List.
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Post by Toriach on May 26, 2011 17:39:31 GMT -5
I liked it, but I didn't realize you claimed Blue Devil, because I did too. I didn't see it on the Master Claims List. *smiling softly* Nope I didn't. The story on our friend in the loud red suit will be revealed very soon, but I'd be willing to bet that a few people have probably already figured it out. |
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Post by Ryan on May 26, 2011 17:46:00 GMT -5
Should I scratch my plans for Blue Devil then? B/c I had plans for him and Red Devil in Zatanna. I didn't see him claimed that's why I grabbed him. But he's already showed up here...So not sure where to go from here.
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Post by entertainer13 on Jun 19, 2011 21:24:35 GMT -5
Not much to comment on, here. A lot of exposition, some decent characterization, nice set up. It will be interesting to see where this goes.
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Post by Stardrifter on Jun 19, 2011 21:49:53 GMT -5
Wasn't a good setup. You've got the dialogue and characters working well. Frankly I never cared about Manhunter in the comics so I'm not sure what's different or the same or anything. Keep 'em coming.
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Post by buck on Jun 20, 2011 1:51:41 GMT -5
Interesting set up. Just a tad anxious to see what you do with Daniel as you having him claimed was the main reason I didn't do a Shadowpact title.
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