|
|
Post by buck on May 1, 2012 12:08:16 GMT -5
I get a JMS Thor vibe off of this title with surface characters being trapped like the Gods were. I'm definitely digging your Aquaman though.
|
|
|
|
Post by thatmaxguy on May 1, 2012 19:44:37 GMT -5
I never read much Aquaman, so most of the finer points of Aquaman's lore are new to me. I'm caught up on all the issues and am really enjoying the character and the basic premise (I'm a sucker road trips and loonies). The first issue is strong and did a really good job introducing the characters, particularly those loonies I like so much.
The last two issues felt a bit rushed to me, though. I like all the plot points, but I want more time to appreciate what's going on. Not a massive decompression, but just a little more time to get know the characters and the situation. I'm hoping to see more of the dynamic between Mera and Siren in the future.
Your descriptions of the battles are great and you do a very good job describing the physics of these water based weapons. In fact, all of the action scenes, from the hockey game to the last fight are done very well.
I look forward to seeing where all these plot threads lead!
|
|
|
|
Post by Stardrifter on May 13, 2012 17:10:44 GMT -5
I think so far this is a well written, interesting take on Aquaman. I only have two complaints, one which can't be helped now and the other which could.
I personally think it was a mistake to show scenes in Atlantis this early. I think it would have been more powerful to the story to have Arthur just traveling to the ocean with us, the reader, having no idea what he'll find. And it would put us in a similar situation as Garth to just have these crazy women appear without any knowledge of how things are in Atlantis. Not a big deal, but a lost opportunity. The moment I read the Atlantis subtitle I was like, "NOOOO!"
I also feel like Arthur's story is taking too long. I came in here to mention it and then I read your post about his trip taking until issue 7! There's a big problem when at this point in time I am way more invested in Garth's story than I am in the main character of the series. A wild and crazy roadtrip with some escaped loonies is a great idea, but it's been kinda dull so far.
That aside, I do really think you've set up an effective beginning to the Aquaman story and I'm interested to see where you take it. Keep 'em coming.
|
|
|
|
Post by buck on Jun 1, 2012 11:26:06 GMT -5
I love this Aquaman. This origin is intriguing and the characters oddness makes each of them so unique. Can't wait to see the full scope of your world.
|
|
|
|
Post by superecwfan1 on Jun 1, 2012 15:28:14 GMT -5
I really have enjoyed this Aquaman take. I finally got a chance to read #2 and #3. Its a very cool take and like what you did with Garth and him wanting to be a rodeo cowboy. Such a shame about Cara. I liked her brief appearance and wish she had lived here. My only little deal is the characters "thoughts" and all as Arthur gets them telepathically . It took me a few seconds to get what you were doing there.  |
|
Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2012 18:03:49 GMT -5
Read the latest issue. Things seem to be moving forward towards the climax of the first arc at a pretty good clip. I am eager to see what happens when Arthur gets some of the answers he has been seeking and what happens when Garth hits the ocean. I like the glimpses we are geting of Orm's Atlantis and Mera's role in the rebellion. It's shaping up nicely.
-M
|
|
|
|
Post by Stardrifter on Jun 4, 2012 19:59:54 GMT -5
Issue was well done, though it felt kinda short. I really would have liked to see more of Garth's reactions and feelings about it all. He was just told he is an Atlantean born with magical powers. Despite what he saw, he took that with no real reaction.
Keep em coming.
|
|
|
|
Post by oberonfrost on Jun 4, 2012 22:24:17 GMT -5
Issue was well done, though it felt kinda short. I really would have liked to see more of Garth's reactions and feelings about it all. He was just told he is an Atlantean born with magical powers. Despite what he saw, he took that with no real reaction. Keep em coming. Not sure what contributed to the short feeling. It was around the standard word count I usually go for for an issue. As for Garth's reaction, you'll obviously see more in the next issue. This was basically your standard "big block 'o text" exposition to explain the Surfacetorn vis a vis the current Atlantean power structure. I think when you see the way it's handled, you'll appreciate the way it was approached. Though I could be wrong. It is episodic fiction after all. You need plenty of reasons to keep coming back, not just one. |
|
|
|
Post by Stardrifter on Jun 4, 2012 23:19:27 GMT -5
Well as I said it "felt" short. I didn't say it was short. Maybe it just flowed quickly for me.
|
|
|
|
Post by liquidsword34 on Jun 10, 2012 19:47:58 GMT -5
Good read. My one complaint is the use of :: for speech. It just seems off putting to me.
|
|
|
|
Post by oberonfrost on Jun 10, 2012 23:06:32 GMT -5
It's common practice in sci-fi literature to denote "telepathic speech" with :: at the beginning and end instead of "s. Sorry if you find it off-putting, but it can be an important distinction in some situations.
|
|
|
|
Post by superecwfan1 on Jul 11, 2012 6:22:27 GMT -5
It took some time but I'm used to the telepathic speech deal you have going. I liked #4 and the story seems to be outlined with what Mera explained to Garth. I can't wait to see the heroes all meet up and face Orm.
|
|
|
|
Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Aug 1, 2012 10:20:37 GMT -5
My standard telepathy is < > but that's cause I grew up with Animorphs.
God, I love this series and want you to get to issue 6 quick so that it cannot be taken out of continuity like all the others. I'm so tired of being burned by liking Ultimate Aquaman.
|
|
|
|
Post by Ultimate Silentking on Aug 8, 2012 21:48:10 GMT -5
This is above average at best to me, but I am interested. I too hope that you make it to issue 6 so you can be officially a part of the UDCU. Hope you get the next issue out soon.
|
|
