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Post by buck on Jun 20, 2011 19:15:45 GMT -5
First solicit is up to be followed by the first issue within the next few days hopefully.
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Post by buck on Jun 21, 2011 13:26:07 GMT -5
I've thrown up some Secret Origins for the characters. My first issue is 90% done just waiting to see if I can get Martian Manhunter from Toriach or not and then I will put the finishing touches on it.
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Post by buck on Jul 6, 2011 13:00:49 GMT -5
I've had more time to write then I anticipated as my complex has moved slow as molasses in getting me into a new unit. Hope all of you enjoy the first issue.
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Post by jackalope on Jul 6, 2011 16:33:20 GMT -5
Haha sweet, great action, great setup. Should be a rollicking good time. Go Adam Strange!
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Post by Stardrifter on Jul 6, 2011 21:12:22 GMT -5
I loved the ideas presented. Is it all in Adam's head or not? Though the question would be more effective if we never see anything but Adam's perspective out in space. Still it was a well done story.
I did notice some spelling and grammar issues. What bothered me the most was some run on sentences. Many times, especially in dialogue, you would make one giant sentence rather than two sentences. For example...
"It was so real though no way that I could make it up." Adam pleaded.
Should actually be...
"It was so real though. No way that I could make it up," Adam pleaded.
It doesn't make it unreadable, but it takes me out of the story when I notice things like that. Just some food for thought. Keep 'em coming.
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Post by buck on Jul 6, 2011 21:40:27 GMT -5
My apologies on the proofreading issues. I'll be sure to spend a little more time proofreading the next issue.
I actually wrote a whole issue with it being completely from Adam's point of view. I wasn't happy with it and decided a rewrite was needed.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jul 10, 2011 19:36:18 GMT -5
Heavy on the dialogue. Light on the action. Loaded to the brim with mindfuck. ^_^ I like.
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Post by darthphere on Jul 11, 2011 21:21:38 GMT -5
Mind fuck is the perfect word to describe this. Looking forward to see where you're going with this title. I'm curious as all hell.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Jul 13, 2011 20:50:58 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this issue that Adam is being held prisoner and his mind is being screwed with. I liked the reveal at the end.
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Post by buck on Jul 24, 2011 2:45:38 GMT -5
Issue Number Two is now up and it concludes the opening arc which leads into what will be an extended look at what brought the Zeta Warriors together and what has bonded them as the only team that can save the universe from destruction as always hope you enjoy.
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Post by jackalope on Jul 24, 2011 3:45:53 GMT -5
Good. Great issue. Found some of the action a little confusing, but definitely got the atmosphere. I wonder whether J'onn will be free enough in the future to join the JLA whenever that occurs in the future? I sure hope so. Oh, and Lobo...
Flarging awesome.
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Post by buck on Jul 24, 2011 3:51:47 GMT -5
I have a 4 issue origins arc coming up and that's followed up with a six issue arc and finally I have something big to send all of the Zeta Warriors crashing into Earth.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jul 24, 2011 10:01:40 GMT -5
Adam Strange missed out on all the fun. Can't tell if it is the way the forum is setup or just you, but it seems like you have a ton of tiny paragraphs.
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Post by buck on Jul 24, 2011 11:36:05 GMT -5
Adam Strange missed out on all the fun. Can't tell if it is the way the forum is setup or just you, but it seems like you have a ton of tiny paragraphs. Probably a little bit of both. |
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Post by buck on Jul 29, 2011 13:18:26 GMT -5
Issue #3 is fixing to go up it starts the Secret Origins Arc that will run for the next couple of issues.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jul 29, 2011 13:27:56 GMT -5
Messed up the title, Bucky.
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Post by jackalope on Jul 29, 2011 16:58:37 GMT -5
Good. Interesting ideas. I know little about your characters, so look forward to seeing who they are.
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Post by buck on Jul 29, 2011 23:13:47 GMT -5
Fixed the title.
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Post by buck on Aug 2, 2011 20:50:54 GMT -5
Issue #4 is now up.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Aug 2, 2011 21:20:19 GMT -5
Nice of you to remember/redo all my coding. I'm still getting the Planet Hulk vibe but there's nothing wrong with that in my mind.
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