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Post by oberonfrost on Nov 24, 2011 12:24:48 GMT -5
Chapter 1 is up. Really, more prologue than chapter, and light on the action. But I think its enjoyable. I hope the opening scene is sufficiently creepy.
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Post by jackalope on Nov 24, 2011 14:34:27 GMT -5
Awesome man. Hardcore villain. Great to get some international Heroes in here. Good work- look forward to more.
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Post by buck on Nov 24, 2011 18:50:39 GMT -5
Hmm I don'tknow much about the Crimson Fox so i am interested to see the title unfold. And the speed and quality are both top notch.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Nov 25, 2011 2:17:19 GMT -5
Despite knowing nothing about the characters, I'm interested. A title hasn't made me feel this way since S.H.A.D.E.'s start.
Fantastic start. You're making me sad that Belal won't be active in universe for another year. He'd make an awesome addition to your line. Well, not quite true. He could still be there. He simply wouldn't be Nightrunner just yet.
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Post by oberonfrost on Nov 25, 2011 2:38:20 GMT -5
I considered claiming Nightrunner. But ultimately I decided against it. I've never read anything with him, so not sure I'd do him justice. Seems like he's a cool character though, and the fact that he does parkour is awesome in and of itself.
Glad you guys have enjoyed the first installment. Chapter 2 should be up before Monday.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Nov 25, 2011 2:43:33 GMT -5
Understandable. Come the time he assumes the mantle, I'll likely have what happens in your line as part of his motivation. It's a cool way to tie the universe together and I never thought it'd happen. Just didn't guess someone would pick France as their locale.
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Post by tjkernan on Nov 25, 2011 3:26:25 GMT -5
Excellent start. Quality work. I look forward to more.
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Post by oberonfrost on Nov 27, 2011 2:12:11 GMT -5
Crimson Fox #2 is up now. Longer than the first installment, still a bit light on the action. But Fox has a very "un-showy" ability, and this chapter gave me an opportunity to highlight that and how useful it can be.
I also think this chapter will demonstrate how I'm going for a darker tone than I think we see in a lot of superhero stories.
Hope you enjoy it!
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Post by buck on Nov 27, 2011 20:27:29 GMT -5
Another terrific chapter down I'm very impressed with your speed. I think you need to pick up a second title just to give the rest of us a chance to keep. I really liked the scene featuring Fox and I liked having the chance to see her powers at play.
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Post by nodosaurus on Nov 27, 2011 22:02:14 GMT -5
I'll second the "speed" comment. As for the story itself, I liked it. Not sure where it's going yet, but it's certainly original.
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Post by oberonfrost on Nov 27, 2011 23:10:45 GMT -5
I am actually thinking about picking up a second title, just not sure what I'd wanna do quite yet.
I'm really enjoying telling the story in Crimson Fox right now, and I hope you fellas will enjoy reading it. Chapter 3 should be up around mid-week and Fox gets to battle her first supervillain!
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Post by jackalope on Nov 28, 2011 14:29:51 GMT -5
Holy Crap dude, the woman in white creeps the shit out of me (Hornets from her eye sockets!). Great stuff, I'm really enjoying what you are doing. Keep it up.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Nov 29, 2011 2:06:11 GMT -5
I wasn't creeped out. Not at all. *screams at own reflection*
Another good issue.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Dec 3, 2011 13:21:15 GMT -5
I really loved that 1st issue read even though it seemed pretty short. Good work man. I loved the introduction and explanation on who the Crimson Fox is between the twin sisters. I also liked the new rogue "Woman in White".
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Post by Stardrifter on Dec 4, 2011 10:35:25 GMT -5
Not much to say that the others haven't. Good start to your series. Only critique is some typos. Looks like you're dropping letters here and there when you type.
Keep em coming.
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Post by C_Miller on Dec 4, 2011 13:27:52 GMT -5
I've been liking it. I will say issue 2 had a little bit too much french dialog for my liking. I do like the authenticity that it brings, but I feel like I missed what was going on in that scene and I was glossing over a lot of it. When I have Wildcat from JSA speak in Spanish I include a translation note at the end.
But I do like where you're going, even though you haven't specifically portrayed your direction. It really does have good vibes though
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Post by superecwfan1 on Dec 18, 2011 1:40:58 GMT -5
Beyond me not knowing French I really liked the spy aspect of the series with Vivian and her confronting Dr. Poison now. I am intriqued by that . Good job on #2.
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Post by oberonfrost on Dec 22, 2011 22:41:31 GMT -5
So, that took a lot longer than I intended. Starting a new job, and then a hell of a cold delayed me quite a bit.
But chapter 3 is up now. A little peek at an upcoming villain. The end of Vivi's first night as the Crimson Fox.
I hope that the book is coming across as a bit of a horror noir story. That's what I'm going for. Let me know if you're getting that when you read it?
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Post by tjkernan on Dec 22, 2011 23:26:29 GMT -5
Very impressive. Your series is so well written. As someone who has been reading and writing comic fanfic for quite a long-time, yours is one of the best I have read. A very vivid and fun read. I am enjoying it immensely.
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Post by C_Miller on Dec 23, 2011 1:37:56 GMT -5
Horror Noir? Interesting, not exactly what I'm getting from it quite yet or at least not without prompting. Now that you mention it, I definitely see it.
What I do get out of it is a very well written story. One of the things that I truly love about this title is how I can see and feel everything. You definitely have a way with description that I wish I had.
I look forward to reading more.
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