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Post by jackalope on Sept 17, 2011 17:57:08 GMT -5
Interesting take on Palmer, curious to see how he becomes the Atom and joins (I'm guessing) with Hawkman. It was a little sparse with action for Hawkman, but I know it was more of a set up for next issue. Would like to know what H.I.V.E.s troops are like. Look forward to the next issue. Keep it up.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Sept 18, 2011 22:54:21 GMT -5
If I could draw them and all...it would be cool. Lets just say they have a bit of a sci-fi take with the head piece and eye goggles . The Queen would be cool in a way to show with a pic. But I'll just have to post a pic of something on the Secret Files and ask people to use their imagination to say its The H.I.V.E.
The Secret Files #2 will be up today.
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Post by Stardrifter on Oct 1, 2011 20:34:52 GMT -5
The story was a nice setup. There's still a number of grammar and tense issues. Some of the dialogue and thoughts were a bit odd. Rays thoughts especially were very expositiony. Its convenient he was thinking about stuff he'd already been through in such detail to explain it all to us But overall the plot is engaging. Keep em coming.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Oct 28, 2011 11:44:44 GMT -5
The story was a nice setup. There's still a number of grammar and tense issues. Some of the dialogue and thoughts were a bit odd. Rays thoughts especially were very expositiony. Its convenient he was thinking about stuff he'd already been through in such detail to explain it all to us But overall the plot is engaging. Keep em coming. Thanks man ...I come from the school of writing where the characters basically explain what they have done and been thru. Its rare we see them tell us readers it anymore in thought panels. But I miss the thought panels a lot. So I am bringing them back . I want people to know the characters very well. To know when a character does Action A , in my plot ...you know why they did it. But thanks for reading
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Post by superecwfan1 on Oct 28, 2011 11:46:07 GMT -5
Issue #9 is up and its part #3 of the H.I.V.E arc. This one has more action and you learn a bit more about Ray Palmer and Jean Loring. I hope you like it and #10 is gonna surprise many next month once its finished.
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Post by jackalope on Oct 29, 2011 6:24:33 GMT -5
Good, I find the people's thoughts a little formal, but the plot is coming along nicely. Interesting use of Palmer's powers. I look forward to seeing how the arc ends.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Oct 30, 2011 12:35:07 GMT -5
I did a fan fiction where I had Ray Palmer as a spy a year or 2 back. So I sit down and started thinking of cool ways to use his powers. So it stuck in my mind. Ray could be a really dangerous type hero if given the chance. Some of what you could do with his powers is scary if ya think bout it.
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Post by Stardrifter on Nov 3, 2011 18:35:23 GMT -5
Was a good issue. A nice bit of conspiracy going on. I find it amusing that Hawkman made such a stupid mistake. But he is kind of a act first and think later kind of guy.
Keep 'em coming.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Nov 4, 2011 11:01:02 GMT -5
Was a good issue. A nice bit of conspiracy going on. I find it amusing that Hawkman made such a stupid mistake. But he is kind of a act first and think later kind of guy. Keep 'em coming. Yeah the thing with Carter is ...he's bran new to being a hero. He really charges in as ya said and really doesn't think as much. Hopefully when someone gets JLA and does that 1st arc you can make a joke that Hawkman needs a plan instead of charging in wanting to smash people with his mace.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Nov 4, 2011 11:29:32 GMT -5
To be fair, every major charge with Steph so far has ended with her in stitches. So it's not like he's alone in that sort of thing.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Nov 14, 2011 16:49:37 GMT -5
Its the 4th part of the H.I.V.E arc. I hope everyone likes where its leading to the final part in 11. Happy reading everyone...
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Nov 14, 2011 18:04:02 GMT -5
Gotta love crazy alien women wanting to mate with our men.
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Post by jackalope on Nov 15, 2011 4:28:17 GMT -5
Really loved Death's cameo, though I'm a sucker for the endless. I wished you'd described what the Queen looked like more, I knew she was weird looking but I couldn't quite picture how, I probably missed it in an earlier one. Good work though, a solid story which is definitely building well.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Nov 16, 2011 4:47:27 GMT -5
Really loved Death's cameo, though I'm a sucker for the endless. I wished you'd described what the Queen looked like more, I knew she was weird looking but I couldn't quite picture how, I probably missed it in an earlier one. Good work though, a solid story which is definitely building well. Well in #8 or #9 I believed I described her appearance best I could. Also if you want a picture , Origins #2 I did , has a pic thats as close to what the Queen looks like without her headset. Just her eyes now have lots of sockets for eyes there. Its a pretty scary picture.
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Post by Stardrifter on Nov 16, 2011 20:29:12 GMT -5
Wasn't bad. Some editing issues. The Queen made me think of Species. I liked the bit with Death as well. I hope you don't run her into the ground though.
Keep 'em coming.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Nov 16, 2011 22:05:32 GMT -5
Death isn't gonna be a cast member who shows up every issue. It will be rare you see Death show up much at all.
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Post by nodosaurus on Nov 17, 2011 23:04:47 GMT -5
After speeding through all 12 issues:
I really like Carter's character right now. The same goes for Ray Palmer. Shiera is a bit out of the way, in the sense that her story- or the bits of it that we get- isn't that connected to Hawkman yet, or even to Carter (from what I can see).
Also, the first arc ended rather abruptly; other than that, no real complaints. I have to repeat how much I like the way Hawkman is turning out, psychologically, and the way the story is going.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Dec 2, 2011 0:49:17 GMT -5
The latest issue of Hawkman is up #11. It ends the H.I.V.E arc and sets up the next arc "Earth Born" in 2 weeks . Happy reading folks.
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Post by jackalope on Dec 3, 2011 1:47:13 GMT -5
Good. I liked how you wrapped the arc up. Nice that Palmer is moving on to Checkmate. Have no idea who Golden Eagle is but bring it on. Consistently good.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Dec 3, 2011 2:25:21 GMT -5
Good. I liked how you wrapped the arc up. Nice that Palmer is moving on to Checkmate. Have no idea who Golden Eagle is but bring it on. Consistently good. He was a former protege with a history in the DCU. This link should cover it. en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golden_Eagle_(comics) I'm gonna revamp his name as well. Put a twist on it now.
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