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Post by superecwfan1 on May 21, 2011 18:32:03 GMT -5
Ok the 1st issue is up. Pardon the grammer errors and all. I was learning to use the spell check here and I learned on the 2nd post , came back and re-edited both spelling wise.
But happy reading and seeing what you like of Ultimate Hawkman. A secret Files deal will follow.
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Post by darthphere on May 21, 2011 23:42:09 GMT -5
Good stuff so far. Nothing really earth shatteringly new but it looks like you're having a lot of fun writing it. And don't worry about grammar, I think we all have our issues with grammar.
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Post by thekillingjoke on May 22, 2011 9:36:32 GMT -5
Sure, there's grammar issues but you're taking chances with the material and that's great. If you get a crazy idea that might be too crazy, do it anyway because God knows I don't want to see the same old thing I've already seen in comics. If I want that, I'll go read the comics, know what I mean?
But yeah man, nice job. I'm impressed by the speed with which you got the first issue up.
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Post by Toriach on May 22, 2011 17:38:45 GMT -5
Solid stuff. Am I correct in assuming that Dr. Fox is a nod to Hawkman's creator Gardner Fox?
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Post by superecwfan1 on May 25, 2011 10:36:16 GMT -5
Good stuff so far. Nothing really earth shatteringly new but it looks like you're having a lot of fun writing it. And don't worry about grammar, I think we all have our issues with grammar. The backstory as time grows will become more changing. The story later this year will explore Nth Metal and how it came to be in Egypt. |
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Post by superecwfan1 on May 25, 2011 10:38:51 GMT -5
Sure, there's grammar issues but you're taking chances with the material and that's great. If you get a crazy idea that might be too crazy, do it anyway because God knows I don't want to see the same old thing I've already seen in comics. If I want that, I'll go read the comics, know what I mean? But yeah man, nice job. I'm impressed by the speed with which you got the first issue up. Oh I plan to do some crazy ideas once the series gets rolling. |
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Post by superecwfan1 on May 25, 2011 10:40:16 GMT -5
Solid stuff. Am I correct in assuming that Dr. Fox is a nod to Hawkman's creator Gardner Fox? Yes it is. I wondered how many would catch it. I was gonna have a doctor character and decided he should have that as a last name. To honor him. |
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Post by C_Miller on May 25, 2011 12:23:46 GMT -5
I can't believe I didn't review this. I read right when you updated. Anyhow, I liked it. Some issues with grammar, but it was updated relatively quickly, so I can't really fault that. But I do like the idea and it does seem to be rather original. I look forward to read more.
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Post by superecwfan1 on May 27, 2011 11:12:49 GMT -5
I decided to get #2 up because I will likely be veeeery busy come June. So I wanted to get #2 up just in case the deadline couldn't get met. So happy reading everyone . Hope ya like the 1st part of Anton Lamont's origin.
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Post by Toriach on May 31, 2011 3:30:15 GMT -5
The second issue was very interesting. I'm guessing that you're building Lanton into a villian of the kind who does a wrong thing for an understandable reason. Also I liked the nod to Hawkman's convoluted continuity with the scene where he first introduces himself as Hawkman after first almost introducing himself as Khu Fu. Very well done over all, I'll be looking forward to the next issue.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Jun 1, 2011 22:36:10 GMT -5
Well the thing with Lanton is he starts out a very nice guy. Its what happens next that changes him. I did that wink to Khu Fu there as where he started. So thanks for noticing it.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Jun 10, 2011 10:01:58 GMT -5
Well I just posted #3 up . It concludes the origin of Fadeaway Man. So I hope everyone likes it . Its a bit of a departure for Anton Lamont as a origin. Plus I throw a wink to the JSA and Vietnam concept a poster wanted to do.
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Post by jackalope on Jun 11, 2011 21:07:18 GMT -5
Took me a second reading to fully appreciate the story and picture it in my head (as I like to do). Its good. I'm enjoying the build up and introductions of the characters, like the detective- man I like detectives... Love the nods to history that can expanded upon (eg. JSA). The main thing I find frustrating, and its probably just my eyes, is the blue text thoughts, which I find really hard to read. Anyway. Keep up Hawkman. (Oh and I will be curious if he comes up with a better name than 'Hawkman')
And bring on Ray Palmer!
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Post by superecwfan1 on Jun 12, 2011 13:40:44 GMT -5
I'll be bringing Palmer in soon . I won't give it away. But I will be introducing him soon in a new way. Glad ya like the JSA move. I know some here posted they want to go with them being in Vietnam . So i decided to expand on that. The writer who does the JSA can bring it home from there.
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Post by Stardrifter on Jun 19, 2011 21:02:19 GMT -5
Nice work. Yeah grammar. Some strange phrasing. But it's clear you know where you're going with it. Keep 'em coming.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jun 19, 2011 23:47:46 GMT -5
And with you, I am all caught up at the moment.
Darn you for taking my colored text idea! I loved the JSA mention. And I'm looking forward to Hawkgirl.
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Post by buck on Jun 20, 2011 0:39:47 GMT -5
Really enjoyed the Anton Lamont bits. I really enjoyed the little nods like Dr. Fox keep up the good work.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Jun 20, 2011 22:27:16 GMT -5
Thanks guys for the props. I also wanna welcome you new writers to the boards. WOW... I go away a few days and daaaamn we get like 8-9 new members and writers. Nice to see.
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Post by superecwfan1 on Jun 25, 2011 20:31:02 GMT -5
Issue #4 of Hawkman is up and concludes my 1st arc on Hawkman. I hope everyone likes it and the epilogues I dropped. Which will be a huge arc later this year. One that will be something that makes everyone go WTF.
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Post by The Wonderful Wachter on Jun 25, 2011 20:51:42 GMT -5
Nice conclusion. Next time I get some free time and need to read something, I'll make sure to check out all 4 to best appreciate it.
Anton went out pretty easily though for something a couple of issues in the making. If it wasn't for your version of Hawkman, I'd call shenanigans on the first super villain being beat that easily.
Also... Yay! Hawkpeople. Or wait...shouldn't that be a no? Titans Together!
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